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This paper is about the development of polygyny in Jewish law. This excerpt defends Maimonides’ application of Islamic law and social standards to his presentation of polygyny in Jewish law.
Jewish tradition overtly centralizes law, and legal systems tend to operate on a top-down basis. Yet, the definitive codes of Jewish scholar Maimonides present another possibility to Jewish traditional attitudes. Maimonides carefully contextualizes and phrases his rulings about polygyny—the case of a man being married to more than one woman at the same time, while polygamy is the general term for marriages of more than two people—in a manner that is more closely akin to culture than to law. In this sense, he treats Islamic law as a social reality that can legitimately impact his juridical conclusions under Jewish law.
Maimonides addresses the topic of polygyny in chapter 14 of his “Hilkhot Ishut”, or the Laws of Marriage, in the broader context of expectations of intimacy between husband and wife (onah). The English translation reads as follows:
A man [has the prerogative of] marrying several wives – even 100, whether at one time or one after the other. … Therefore, our Sages commanded that a person should not marry more than four wives, although he has ample financial resources, so that he will be able to fulfill his conjugal obligations towards each one once a month.1
Maimonides places this law in a very surprising context.2 If he truly wanted to express support for polygyny based on Jewish marital tradition, then he would have placed it in chapter 10 which addresses the laws of marriage. To express it as an addendum to Hilkhot Onah – laws specifically governing expectations of physical intimacy – diminishes its emphasis as a form of marriage. Instead of making a point about polygyny, Maimonides makes his point about Hilkhot Onah, and he uses polygyny as a mode by which to express his point. This placement expresses that Maimonides does not treat polygyny as a central question in Jewish tradition; instead, it is a reality affecting physical intimacy that can be socially accepted or rejected.
Further, the substantive content of his presentation subtly mirrors aspects of Islamic law. Maimonides writes: “our Sages commanded that a person should not marry more than four wives, although he has ample financial resources, so that he will be able to fulfill his conjugal obligations towards each one once a month.” Yet, the Talmudic sages did not “command” that a person not marry more than four wives. In fact, they explicitly termed this advice as an “עצה טובה,” good advice.3 Maimonides’ transformation of the Talmud’s advice into a “command” actually echoes the Islamic law which imposes a firm limit of four wives. 4
In addition to his consistency with Islamic tradition, Maimonides also neglects the formulation borne by Jewish tradition. In doing so, he does not reject the Jewish perspective; he merely treats any presumed Jewish Masoretic perspective on this topic as a legal fiction. In its only direct discussion on the validity of polygyny, the Talmud presents two opinions:
Rabbi Ami said: Even in this case he must divorce [his first wife] and give [her the payment for her] marriage contract, as I say that whoever marries a woman in addition to his [first] wife must divorce [his first wife] and give [her the payment for her] marriage contract. [Conversely,] Rava said that a man may marry several women in addition to his first wife, and [there is nothing wrong with this practice] as long as he has enough to support them.5
Many rabbinic scholars, in their commentary on Maimonides’ law, situate him in Rava’s camp. Both permit polygynous marriages.6 However, in truth, many medieval rabbinic scholars believed that both Rava and Rabbi Ami accept polygynous marriages. They argue that Rabbi Ami merely requires consent from the first wife, while Rava does not.7 Neither party is rejecting or endorsing polygynous marriages; instead, they debate the requirement for permission from the first wife.
When Maimonides deviates from Rava’s language, he implies that he sides with those scholars who frame the Talmudic debate as nonexistent. In this sense, he is not forsaking Jewish tradition for Islamic law, nor is he rooting his teaching in Rava’s. Rather, he is employing Islamic law as a social standard for a topic that is not addressed directly within Jewish tradition. Thus, when other rabbinic scholars criticize him for deviating from Jewish tradition and subscribing to what they term “Muslim practices”, they fail to understand that Maimonides does not view the question of polygyny as a question of tradition; he views it as a social question.8
Hagahot Maimoniyot and Maggid Mishneh on Maimonides. Mishneh Torah, Hilkhot Ishut 14:3.
Maimonides (Rabbi Moses ben Maimon). Iggerot ha-Rambam. “Mikhtav ha-Meyukhas le-Ḥakhmei Lunel.” Mishneh Torah: Sefer Nashim. “Ishut,” chap. 14. Translated by Eliyahu Touger. Brooklyn: Moznaim Publishing.
Rabbi Mordechai ben Hillel ha-Kohen. Mordechai on Ketubot. No. 291.
Ritva (Rabbi Isaac ben Sheshet of Dampierre). Commentary on Yevamot 65a.
Tur. Even ha-Ezer 1:1.
Twersky, Isadore. Introduction to the Code of Maimonides (Mishneh Torah). New Haven: Yale University Press, 1980.
It has been a pleasure writing this paper. I took Professor Krakowski’s “Marriage and Monotheism” course, which introduced me to the centralization of marriage in monotheistic traditions (in particular, Judaism, Islam, and Christianity). I took interest in the topic of polygyny and decided to tackle an issue that does not have a lot of previous research: Maimonides’ position on polygyny. Maimonides was a medieval rabbinic scholar who lived in Islamic society. He compiled a code (the Mishneh Torah) that he believed covered the entire corpus of Jewish legal tradition. He was clearly influenced by his Islamic surroundings, and he also clearly bore a deep regard for Jewish tradition and orthodox practice. It is interesting to see the two merge as he develops his position on polygynous marriages.
It was particularly interesting to study this topic in light of its meta-legal implications. It is a topic that is permitted by the Bible, and yet has become one of the most socially egregious violations in all of Judaism. The prohibition was even instituted on a social scale, and, as my analysis of Maimonides shows, it was endorsed by rabbinic scholars because of the society in which they were living. It fascinates me how such a central legal principle has such sociological roots.
Eitan’s wonderfully written piece truly embodies this year’s theme of “deep dive” as he explores a highly niche academic topic that is not widely familiar to those outside of Judaic studies. Yet, he does an excellent job of orienting the reader in a very clear and concise manner. In this excerpt, Eitan provides just enough contextual information to make the argument accessible without oversimplifying its complexity. What stands out most, however, is the way in which Eitan meaningfully engages with a scholarly conversation that has lasted for centuries and is still ongoing today. Entering such an ancient debate is itself a significant undertaking, and it is especially impressive how he has been able to identify a fresh angle through which to evaluate existing arguments and contribute new insight. In this excerpt, Eitan’s analysis really shines through. In my opinion, one of the most compelling moments of analysis comes from his interpretation of Maimonides’ textual placement: “If he truly wanted to express support for polygyny based on Jewish marital tradition, then he would have placed it in chapter 10 which addresses the laws of marriage… This placement expresses that Maimonides does not treat polygyny as a central question in Jewish tradition; instead, it is a reality affecting physical intimacy that can be socially accepted or rejected.” Here, Eitan employs an important close reading strategy by examining not only what the author states explicitly, but also the broader context surrounding the text. In doing so, he is able to draw out new insights that earlier scholars may not have recognized, demonstrating how meaning can emerge beyond an author’s direct claims. Lastly, one of Eitan’s greatest strengths is his clear commitment to academic objectivity and intellectual integrity. The topic he engages is inherently controversial, yet he does not approach it with the aim of persuading readers toward a predetermined position. Instead, Eitan analyzes the material in a careful and methodical manner and demonstrates a willingness to consider multiple perspectives and interpretations. This openness ultimately strengthens his argument as it reflects a nuanced understanding of the topic rather than pushing for a one-sided claim. His concluding sentence is particularly effective in this regard because it underscores his ability to analyze Maimonides’ argument thoughtfully without the interference of religious bias.
Eitan Gelb ‘28 is a sophomore at Princeton, studying Electrical and Computer Engineering. He has edited and written in school newspapers and journals, and he has also been published in journals related to academic Jewish topics. Some recent publications include: The History of The Study of Kodashim and An Analysis of The Laws of Building a Temple.
Sharon Leonard ‘27 is a junior in the History department at Princeton. In addition to working as an editor at Tortoise, she is also a Writing Fellow at the Writing Center and an editor at MoonPress. She has previously written and edited Archive Section pieces for the Daily Princetonian. One day, she hopes to publish her own fiction novel.
Over our time with Tortoise – three years for Natalia, two for Jordan – we have come to see this journal as an extension of the work we do each week at the Writing Center. Conversations that begin in hour-long conferences continue here on the page. Tortoise offers a space to linger in those moments: to return to them, to reflect on them, and to make visible the process that so often remains behind the scenes of finished writing.
This year’s theme, Deep Dive, grows out of that impulse. A deep dive is not simply about going further; it is about going more deliberately. It asks what happens when writers stay with a question a little longer, follow a line of thought a little more closely, or return to a conversation with renewed attention. Depth, in this sense, is not only a matter of complexity, but of care: a willingness to explore, to revise, and to remain open to where the writing might lead.
The pieces in this issue approach that depth in different ways, reflected in the structure of our sections. In Construction traces the careful building of an argument, showing how writers lay the scholarly groundwork that allows their own ideas to take shape. In Transit follows writing as it moves – across disciplines, frameworks, and ways of thinking – demonstrating how connection itself can generate new insight. In Detail turns to the power of close attention, revealing how sustained focus on even the smallest elements can open onto larger claims. Our feature piece brings these approaches together, offering a sustained engagement that models what it means to fully inhabit a line of inquiry.
Tortoise remains grounded in the belief that writing is as much a process as it is a product. Each piece in this issue is presented not as a finished whole, but as an excerpt carefully chosen to highlight a particular strength. These excerpts are accompanied by reflections from both the writer and the editor, offering insight into the decisions, challenges, and discoveries that shaped the work. Together, they invite readers into the ongoing, iterative nature of writing, one that unfolds through revision, conversation, and sustained engagement over time.
We hope this issue inspires you to take your own deep dive!
Jordan Fraser Angel ‘27 is a junior from Florence, Italy. She is majoring in Comparative Literature, with a minor in Creative Writing. Working at the Writing Center as a Head Fellow is one of her favorite activities at Princeton. She also enjoys reading, listening to classical and pop music, Pilates, cooking vegan meals at 2 Dickinson Co-op, and spending time with friends and family.
Natalia Espinosa Dice ‘26 is a senior from Verona, New Jersey. She is majoring in Computer Science and minoring in Latin American Studies and Cognitive Science. In addition to working as a Head Fellow at the Writing Center, she rides for the Princeton Equestrian Team and is an Outdoor Action Leader. In her free time, she loves running, hiking and spending time with friends.
My research project examines why students in major universities in China are unable to express acknowledgement and recognition of the famous Tank Man picture taken during the Tiananmen Square Protests of 1989 and the implications of “disremembering” in the context of broader historical revisionist practices. In investigating the limitations of the theory of public place memory and generational memory preservation, I argue that the Chinese population actively chooses to engage in “selective disremembering” as a self-preservationist technique. Selective disremembering poses an additional filter, an important consideration when drawing population-representative conclusions, but of which Western scholarly bias neglects; this research is particularly relevant to scholars interested in studying contemporary China.
This picture is on the cover of “Time 100: The Most Influential Images of All Time”1 and was nominated for the Pulitzer Prize shortly after its release.2 The instantly recognizable image depicts a young man in the lower left corner carrying two shopping bags and defiantly obstructing the path as four tanks advance towards him. The man’s identity remains shrouded in mystery, going on to be conferred the title ‘Unknown Rebel.’3 This powerful photograph, formally known as the ‘Tank Man,’ captured the spirit of China’s Tiananmen Square Massacre in 1989.4 As one of “100 Photographs That Changed the World,”5 the Tank Man became a global symbol for individual defiance and nonviolent courage against an oppressive military force and political regime during the Massacre. What began as student-led protests culminated in a violent confrontation between the Chinese government and its population. An estimated 50,000 to 200,000 students from the most acclaimed universities across Beijing marched from their campuses to Tiananmen Square in demand for national reform and the continuation of burgeoning democratic practices in China.6
25 years later, journalist and author of The People’s Republic of Amnesia: Tiananmen Revisited, Dr. Louisa Lim’s research brings her to the same university campuses of the Tiananmen Square Incident.7 Conducted in 2014 (marking the Protests’ 25th year anniversary), Dr. Lim surveyed students at universities across Beijing, presenting to each student the iconic image of the Tank Man and asking if the student possessed any recognition of the photograph.
Of the 100 students surveyed across the universities that had some connection to the event and in turn, the Tank Man, only 15 of the 100 students recognized the picture. Here, the theory of public place memory proposed by Edward Casey, a leading philosophical psychology theorist, posits that in the context of an event that is significant to public memory (Tiananmen), place and space (the universities of the student protestors) facilitate remembrance of ‘active materials’ heavily associated with the event and the location.8 Yet, the population hails from the institutions at the crux of the event and are illustrative of the places and spaces that Casey espouses.9 Consequently, why is place unable to prompt recognition of the image?
In tandem, French philosopher and sociologist Maurice Halbwachs’ theory of generational memory preservation explicates that the temporal quality of memory remains for at least two generations since an event’s occurrence.10 Nevertheless, it has been less than two generations since the event happened in 1989 and when the survey was conducted in 2014 with the next generations of students.11 Alas, why does the absence of generational distance between the event and the survey date further not explain students’ inability to recognize the photograph?
Although standard narratives attribute this gap to be the byproduct of extreme censorship and propaganda employed by the Chinese Communist Party that results in the students no longer knowing about this emblematic image, what other reasons could account for this phenomenon? How might solely looking at the preservation of memory in place and time pose limits to this analysis? This paper investigates the Western bias present in the survey through the concept of ‘selective disremembering’ to faithfully answer the question: Why were only 15 students able to identify the Tank Man?
I argue that while preservation of the past and memory exists in place and time, these elements are rendered invisible in the context of powerful, sustained historical revisionism. Instead, what becomes truly visible is the desire for self-preservation that incentivizes populations to engage in ‘selective disremembering’—a concept that describes the exercise of discretion over memory and knowledge. However, scholarly bias12 makes it difficult to identify that ‘selective disremembering’ poses an additional dimension that researchers interested in studying modern China must be cognizant of. For that reason, data collection that triggers the filter of ‘disremembering’ often produces inaccurate findings and fallacious scholarly interpretations. This research underscores that bias must be taken into consideration when attempting to draw population-representative conclusions.
In this paper, I will first discuss the limitations of Casey and Halbwachs’ theories in relation to the survey conducted with students who face historical revisionist practices and possess different cultural values than the surveyor. Then, I will explain the conceptual framework of selective disremembering in the context of historical revisionism and explain how (1) the artifacts smuggled to Taiwan during the Cultural Revolution and (2) the beliefs that surrounded China’s Great Famine are events that further elucidate the underlying agency of ‘disremembering.’ Thereafter, I will explore the implications of conducting research with scholarly bias and without acknowledging ‘selective disremembering,’ a critical filter scholars should account for when analyzing public opinion and evaluating the reliability of data coming from the PRC. Else, scholarly understandings of contemporary China risk remaining tethered to reflections of Western biases as opposed to the lived realities of populations of interest.
“About.” Jeff Widener. Accessed May 7, 2025. https://www.jeffwidener.com/about/.
“Tank Man.” Encyclopædia Britannica, March 14, 2025. https://www.britannica.com/biography/Tank-Man.
Casey, Edward S. “Public Memory in Place and Time.” In Framing Public Memory. University of Alabama Press, 2007.
Halbwachs, Maurice. On Collective Memory. United States: University of Chicago Press, 2024.
Lim, Louisa. The People’s Republic of Amnesia: Tiananmen Revisited. New York, NY: Oxford University Press, 2015.
Pickert, Kate. “Tank Man at 25: Behind the Iconic Tiananmen Square Photo.” TIME, June 5, 2014. https://time.com/2822322/iconic-tiananmen-tank-man-photo/.
This is an excerpt from my Assignment 4 paper written in my Writing Seminar, WRI146: Constructing the Past. When I began brainstorming my paper, I considered dozens of different ideas before solidifying my research topic on the ‘Tank Man’ image taken during the Tiananmen Square Massacre. This topic and primary source has been examined by many scholars—including Dr. Louisa Lim’s The People’s Republic of Amnesia—predominantly through the angle of state-sanctioned propaganda and historical revisionist practices. With pre-existingly robust literature, I struggled to enter a scholarly conversation where it seemed everyone had already finished talking.
After meeting with my professor, I researched and re-researched to conceptualize the motive beyond the well-trodden route of oppressive memory and government control. While these assumptions hold ground, I carefully thought about pushing back against claims advocated by scholars, such as Dr. Lim, that the Chinese population has truly forgotten major events from China’s historical tapestry. This meant the scholarly sources I originally intended to use in my argument on revisionism would serve a completely distinct purpose. I pivoted to the idea with a whiteboard and dry-erase marker in hand, sketching out my burgeoning thoughts on orienting sources, motive-building, thesis development, evidence situating, potential analysis, and thinking about the implications of the research. Now, I revisited Dr. Lim’s evidence of revisionism, through the lens of scholarly bias, further contemplating whether the students in the survey could have provided false answers to the question of: ‘Do you recognize this image,’ a limitation that the conclusions of The People’s Republic of Amnesia does not entirely account for. Upon asking these questions, I saw the gap in expressed versus unexpressed knowledge (yet, does in fact recognize the ‘Tank Man’) that could alter the survey results and extrapolated interpretations.
Driven by these inquiries, my thesis investigates the shortcomings of Western-centric discussions on revisionism, specifically through a concept I term ‘selective disremembering’ that serves as a filter to understanding populations that Western scholars often fail to consider and consequently creates scholarly bias. The scholars I brought into my paper, Edward Casey and Maurice Halbwachs, provide the theoretical premise for the lacuna of ‘why only 15 of the 100 students surveyed were able to recognize the picture.’ From there, I found evidence of other historical events that Western scholars would deem to solely fit the ‘historical revisionism’ concept but in my analysis, I explain how the events could actually also be understood through ‘selective disremembering’ as self-preservation and individual agency within a nation that been viewed by the West as having exercised full power over its population.
Writing my paper has been an equally challenging and rewarding endeavor throughout drafts during Writing Seminar to now, revising my paper for publication in Tortoise. The writing journey taught me to unrelentingly pursue the exploration of my ideas; in contending with established theories and data from giants in their fields, I have learned to make room for my voice at the scholarly table—and I seek to continue building these skills in my future works.
Writing a compelling introduction in Writing Seminar can be both challenging and intimidating for many students, especially because the structure is often variable and departs from the conventional format emphasized in high school. Introductions in this context are especially significant, as they provide the space for writers to map the development of their motivating questions, situate their work within scholarly conversations, and ultimately lead to the formulation of a thesis. In this regard, Winnie’s paper is especially effective, as she not only fulfills these objectives but does so in a manner that is both accessible and engaging for the reader.
From the excerpt, it is evident from the outset that Winnie establishes a clear empirical motive. She notes the irony that, despite the Tank Man image being “a global symbol for individual defiance and nonviolent courage” and appearing on the cover of Time 100 as well as being nominated for the Pulitzer Prize, it was recognized by “only 15 of the 100 students” surveyed at universities across Beijing. Winnie extends this empirical motive by situating it within a scholarly context, demonstrating how her analysis engages with existing literature. She argues that prior applications of public place theory and generational memory preservation are insufficient to explain this phenomenon, which positions her work as a meaningful contribution to ongoing academic conversations. This careful layering of motive naturally leads to a motivating question that is both explicit and persuasive.
With the components of the motive clearly established, her thesis offers an equally structured and insightful response by introducing the concept of “selective disremembering” – a unique and original framework that she defines and contextualizes for the reader.
The final paragraph of her introduction functions as a roadmap for the paper, outlining how each section contributes to the central thesis: first by addressing theoretical limitations, then by explicating the concept of selective disremembering and linking it to specific historical events, and finally by discussing broader implications. This roadmap gives readers a clear sense of the paper’s trajectory and its intellectual stakes.
Winnie concludes her introduction with a powerful statement emphasizing the significance of her contribution, noting that misinterpretations of contemporary China are at stake. This further underscores the intellectual and ethical importance of her argument while offering the readers a final compelling reason to engage with her argument.
Winnie Lin ‘28 is a sophomore majoring in Public and International Affairs and pursuing minors in History and Environmental Studies. Winnie hails from New York, New York; on campus, she serves as Co-Chair of the Peer Career Advisers program, Co-Director of Events at the Julis-Rabinowitz Center for Public Policy and Finance, Chair of Operations for the Princeton International Relations Council Diplomatic Invitational, and is a James Madison Program for American Ideals and Institutions Fellow. In her free time, Winnie loves exploring museums, creating oil pastel art, and writing poetry.
Doris Lee ‘27 is a junior majoring in the School of Public and International Affairs (SPIA) with a minor in English. On campus, she is a Writing Center Fellow, Student House Manager at Richardson Auditorium, a research assistant in the SPIA department, and Vice President of Baking Bad. In her free time, she enjoys reading, listening to music, and crocheting.
This piece is an excerpt from my senior thesis midyear report. My thesis project draws on ideas in engineering, biology, and mathematics to model the growth dynamics of a genetically engineered yeast population. In this section, I describe the biological background of my project.
Synthetic biology is the practice of applying engineering principles to biological systems, typically cells, redesigning them for targeted use. Synthetic biology draws parallels between cells and electronic devices, particularly by treating cells as controllable input/output systems enabled by four broad cellular subsystems: sensing, signaling, regulation, and metabolism (Del Vecchio and Murray 2015). Synthetic biologists manipulate these subsystems by changing or adding to a cell’s genetic material in order to make cells behave in defined ways. This process of “cutting and pasting” natural and synthetic pieces of DNA together and inserting them into a cell, called cloning, has been enabled by recombinant DNA technology, PCR (DNA amplification), and the ability to artificially synthesize DNA.
Synthetic biology ties closely to metabolic engineering, which introduces or optimizes cellular processes, typically to produce substances of interest such as pharmaceuticals, biofuels, and specialized chemicals (Markina, Kotlobay, and Tsarkova 2020). A key concern for metabolic engineers is how to scale engineered cells for industrial use: as therapeutic agents, for biomanufacturing of food and drugs, and for environmental efforts like water purification or carbon capture.
Despite the seemingly ‘programmable’ nature of cells, unique challenges arise in the biological environment, making it difficult to achieve reliable behavior from engineered cells, and therefore to scale engineered populations to the extent required for industrial use.
Stochasticity: Even under controlled conditions, the behavior of a cell can be unpredictable, making experiments difficult to reproduce. Stochasticity is present throughout biological systems and may arise from external perturbations to the cell or internal processes like molecular binding and unbinding.
Mutation: When cells divide, they replicate their DNA. This is an opportunity for mutations, or changes to their DNA, to occur. Every so often, a cell may receive an “escape mutant”– a version of the DNA that nullifies the function of the engineered construct (Radde et al., 2024).
Competition for limited cellular resources: Exogenous (engineered) and endogenous (pre-existing) DNA compete for the same limited set of resources within a cell for reading and executing the instructions they contain. Thus, introducing new DNA into a cell detracts from its ability to perform essential functions like growth and division. This metabolic burden, or stress, causes decreased cellular growth rate or otherwise interferes with homeostasis, the cell’s ability to maintain a stable internal cellular environment.
One potential solution to the third problem is to decouple cell growth (an energy-intensive process) from resource production using a two-phase fermentation process. In the first phase, cells are allowed to grow without restrictions. In the second phase, growth processes are switched off, which frees up internal cellular resources for heterologous production while also preventing toxic byproducts of this production reaction from interfering with cell growth processes.
Many methods exist to control cell growth, but one attractive technique that has emerged is optogenetic (light-based) manipulation: yeast can be genetically engineered so that essential growth pathways are controlled by a light-activated protein. Zhao et al. successfully demonstrate that two-phase fermentation indeed allows yeast cells to switch resources from growth (under blue light) to production (in darkness) (Zhao et al. 2018). However, when light-controlled strain cultures are left in darkness/non-growth conditions for long periods of time (40-100 hours), yeast cultures eventually escape the optogenetic growth control, developing an ability to grow even in the dark (Figure 1). It is hypothesized that this is due to the emergence of “cheater” cells, cells which receive mutations to the genetic elements involved in optogenetic control (Gonzalez et al. 2025).

In this thesis, I model the population dynamics of growth-controlled cells when cheaters emerge. Using a few salient parameters, such as cell growth, death, and mutation rate, the model captures the unique features of population growth following cheater emergence: an extended lag time before cheaters arise, rapid increase in population size around t = 50 hours, and for some trials, multiple bursts of population growth
Further, I will investigate the effect of a proposed intervention on these cells–expressing a DNA-binding protein–that nearly doubles the amount of time taken for cells to cheat. By varying the parameters to match two hypotheses for how this intervention effects a change on the cell, I will obtain evidence in support of one, both, or neither of these hypotheses. This evidence will be used to inform our understanding of whether, and how, chromatin-binding proteins slow the onset of genetic instability. Insights from the model may also be used to translate the findings on chromatin-binding proteins to cells that contain gene circuits besides the growth-control circuit tested here.
Del Vecchio, D., & Murray, R. M. (2015). Biomolecular feedback systems. Princeton University Press.
González, L., Echauri, S. A. G., Jeronimo, C., Poitras, C., Gencel, M., Serohijos, A., Bloom, K., Robert, F., Avalos, J. L., & Michnick, S. W. (2025). HP1-enhanced chromatin compaction stabilizes a synthetic metabolic circuit in yeast (p. 2025.03.04.641524). bioRxiv. https://doi.org/10.1101/2025.03.04.641524
Markina, N. M., Kotlobay, A. A., & Tsarkova, A. S. (2020). Heterologous Metabolic Pathways: Strategies for Optimal Expression in Eukaryotic Hosts. Acta Naturae, 12(2), 28–39. https://doi.org/10.32607/actanaturae.10966
Radde, N., Mortensen, G. A., Bhat, D., Shah, S., Clements, J. J., Leonard, S. P., McGuffie, M. J., Mishler, D. M., & Barrick, J. E. (2024). Measuring the burden of hundreds of BioBricks defines an evolutionary limit on constructability in synthetic biology. Nature Communications, 15(1), 6242. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-024-50639-9
Zhao, E. M., Zhang, Y., Mehl, J., Park, H., Lalwani, M. A., Toettcher, J. E., & Avalos, J. L. (2018). Optogenetic regulation of engineered cellular metabolism for microbial chemical production. Nature, 555(7698), 683–687. https://doi.org/10.1038/nature26141
I came into Princeton with a desire to understand how living systems are programmed: how do our cells ‘know’ what to do, and how can we control their behavior? My search for answers took me to far corners of the academic space on campus, and I found ideas in electrical engineering, molecular biology, neuroscience, philosophy, and more. My senior thesis brings together what could be called the ‘philosophical ideas’ of ECE–how information is stored and used, how components can be linked together into circuits that perform complex tasks–with the workings of biology, and uses a little bit of math and coding to put those ideas together.
Because of the interdisciplinary nature of my project, I felt that a strong orienting section was crucial to my thesis report. Writing this section was challenging for a couple of reasons: first, I had to take care to steer away from niche field-specific language without sounding too informal or making it seem like I was circumlocuting technical words. Second, writing conventions vary within engineering fields, with different readers seeking different information about the problem at hand. My advisors and readers are housed in three departments (MAE, CBE, and ECE), and I had to carefully choose information that would be appropriate to their respective areas of expertise while providing sufficient background about the other areas.
In this section, I aim to lay out the fields of synthetic biology and metabolic engineering in broad strokes: what are the motivating ideas and overarching goals? What experimental techniques are commonly used? What are the major challenges? A major goal for this section was to answer these questions in simple terms, distilling the fields down to only the relevant points required to understand my project, then presenting them as clearly as possible. Two pieces of the Lexicon were crucial to this: careful structuring, and deliberate use of key terms. I broke the excerpt into three sections: one outlining the motivation and goals of the field, a second describing some key problems, and a third that began to zero in on the specific setting for my thesis. I also defined terms like “mutation,” “cheater,” “stochasticity,” and “metabolic burden,” which all feature prominently later in the report. This excerpt also begins to set up the motive for my thesis, situating my project within the broader fields of synthetic biology and metabolic engineering.
One reason I felt so comfortable writing this section, and proud of it once it was finished, was that it was a summary of many of the ideas that I picked up over the course of my time here. By the time I started writing my report, I had read dozens, perhaps hundreds, of review papers, textbook chapters, and news articles on synthetic biology and metabolic engineering. This exercise better acquainted me with writing conventions across different engineering disciplines while also giving me ideas on how to structure this excerpt most logically. Beyond serving as the orienting section of my thesis, this piece is a distillation of much of my academic exploration at Princeton.
How do we explain our work to audiences outside of our discipline? Sanjana tackles this question with professional precision in her thesis project introduction. This section demonstrates what it means to write with an audience in mind — in this case, an interdisciplinary set of readers with varying backgrounds in biology and engineering.
A piece like this can easily become bogged down with confusing jargon. Yet what stands out about Sanjana’s execution is how she carefully defines key terms in digestible language. She makes liberal use of tactics such as subheadings, italicization, and list format to lend structure to her thoughts. In doing so, she is able to fit an impressive amount of information into little space without losing clarity or direction.
Her introduction is an example of the classic inverted pyramid structure: She begins broadly and narrows in on her specific corner of the field. Like a tour guide, she takes us from an overview of her discipline into the world of programmable cells, and then she delves deeper into the technique of optogenetic growth control and the problem of cheaters. She seeds motive throughout the piece using signal phrases about challenges, limitations, or unexplored problems in the field. This neatly leads us to the end, in which she presents her project’s two parts to address this research gap.
This piece shows us how to apply Lexicon concepts to a STEM research sphere. For Sanjana’s thesis, orienting means situating her project in the landscape of past scientific research. The scholarly conversation becomes a “dialogue” between past scholars, studies, and research advances. We find motive in a research gap: a puzzle, a “not obvious” corner of the field, a problem that has yet to be solved. This introduction is informative and deliberate, and Sanjana’s confident writing voice guides the reader through every step of the way.
Sanjana Venkatesh ‘26 is an Electrical and Computer Engineering major pursuing minors in Bioengineering, Robotics, and Religion. She is interested in synthetic biology and bioethics and enjoys exploring these topics from various angles through different departments at Princeton. She is involved with performing arts on campus through Naacho South Asian Dance and Kalaa Dance Troupe, and loves to spend time outdoors with friends from OA and Running Club.
Jessica Wang ‘26 is an Ecology and Evolutionary Biology major who loves writing stories. Her writing has appeared in the Nassau Literary Review, figments, Arch & Arrow Literary Magazine, and the Daily Princetonian’s Prospect section. On campus, you can find her working as a Writing Fellow, singing in the Playhouse Choir, and getting distracted by birds.
The piece is an analysis of how Lorca and the 1994 cinematic adaptation of The House of Bernarda Alba employ the use of the color white throughout the narrative. In particular, it mobilizes the aesthetic dimension of the works in order to discuss how the color relates to the atmosphere of surveillance that exists within the domestic space.
…In fact, through most of the play, the color black works as a symbol of control over female bodies. The women in the play are all wearing black to express the grief for the loss of their father, as indicated in the stage direction “Por el fondo, de dos en dos empiezan a entrar mujeres de luto con pañuelos grandes, faldas y abanicos negros” (Lorca 16)/ “Upstage, female mourners enter in pairs, wearing skirts, big shawls, and holding black fans” (my translation). Other moments also contribute to the association of black with grief, such as when the family matriarch, Bernarda, chides her daughter for not giving her a black hand fan, which would indicate, according to the widow, a lack of respect for the grief she was experiencing (23). Black, therefore, functions as an essential part of the public performance of mourning. However, the central issue in relation to the color is that instead of being solely used as an expression of sorrow for the death of a loved one, it is also employed as a form of control over the daughters, whom Bernarda prohibits from leaving the house for eight years as an expression of mourning (23). Due to the power of the matriarch, they are unable to exercise their freedom to circulate in public spaces. In this sense, the use of black functions as a marker of their mourning and, consequently, a constant reminder of their prison.
Similarly to how the symbolic force of black goes beyond the dimension of protection, the color white is not solely employed to signify systems of surveillance. This is particularly seen through Camus’s 1987 adaptation of Lorca’s play. In the cinematic piece, the grandmother, Maria Josefa, only appears in white. There is, consequently, a rupture with the strict mourning that Bernarda imposed upon those who lived under her house. White as a costume choice further reinforces the character’s state of separation from Bernarda’s strict system of control, complicating a monolithic interpretation of white as a sign.
Still, the relationship between white and surveillance is reinforced in Lorca’s set description in the second and third acts of the play. Notably, during the play’s second act, the playwright slightly modifies how he characterizes the environment. The color white is still present, but instead of repeating the term “blanquíssima”/ “very white,” Lorca employs the word “blanca” (49)/ “white”, writing: “Habitación blanca del interior de la casa de Bernarda” (49)/ “White room inside Bernarda’s house.” Through this, there seems to be a change in the intensity of luminosity in the environment, indicating a shift in the degree of vigilance that exists within the house.
In the second act, the daughters of Bernarda still seem to surveil each other. Martirio’s line “(Con intención.) ¿Es que no has dormido bien esta noche?” (57)/ “(Maliciously) Is it because you haven’t slept last night?” demonstrates this. The stage direction “con intención” indicates that she suspects Adela’s involvement with Pepe El Romano, probably as a result of observing her sister’s behavior. The movie reinforces the idea of surveillance between the two characters by placing them in the middle of an artificial white light —an element that amplifies what is able to be seen—during this confrontation (44:00-44:17). La Poncia, the family’s maid, also seems to suspect Adela’s affair. This is suggested when she says “De Pepe el Romano, ¿no es eso?” (59)/ “Of Pepe el Romano, isn’t it?” after Adela asserts that her body will belong to whoever she desires (59). In later moments, the audience discovers that La Poncia’s inference is a result of the surveillance she admits having engaged in through the lines “Las viejas vemos a través de las paredes. ¿Dónde vas de noche cuando te levantas?”(59)/ “Old women see through the walls. Where are you going when you get up in the night?”
The episodes above demonstrate the continuous existence of surveillance. Nevertheless, the second act marks an important shift in the narrative: Bernarda, the source of authority of the home, is no longer aware of the relevant matters that are happening. In fact, she was consciously attempting to avoid facing the intricacies of the conflict between her daughters. When La Poncia tries to discuss with Bernarda the conflict between the daughters, she promptly rejects the opportunity to reflect on the quarrel by saying, “No creo que ésta sea la ‘cosa muy grande’ que aquí pasa. Aquí no pasa nada” (81)/ “I don’t think that this is the ‘really big thing’ that is happening here. Nothing is happening here.” The line reveals the degree of ignorance of Bernarda, who experiences a reduction, through denial, of her control over the activities that occurred within her daughters’ lives and, consequently, in her house.
This paper discusses the use of the color white as an element that signifies surveillance in The House of Bernarda Alba, a play written by Federico García Lorca. When I decided to focus on this work for my final paper in COM 318 (The Modern Period), I delved into secondary literature centered around the play. This quickly made me realize that many of the points I initially considered focusing on had been discussed, particularly the themes of motherhood and oppression. When reflecting on how I could find gaps in the scholarly work that had been produced until then, I noticed that little attention had been given to the significance of the colors Lorca employs in the play. This aesthetic dimension is central in theater, as it allows a piece to continuously create meaning beyond the words in a script. Additionally, Lorca is well-known for exploring the symbolic dimension of colors in his poetic work, notably the color green in the poem Romance Sonámbulo. By noticing a pattern of repetition surrounding the color white, I conducted a textual analysis that allowed me to uncover that white is frequently used as an element that exposes the deep politics of surveillance that occurs within the house of the matriarch, Bernarda Alba.
I also desired to incorporate a visual primary source, as this would contribute towards bringing a certain stillness of the script to life, materializing Lorca’s written descriptions. For that, I selected the cinematic adaptation of the play, produced by Mario Camus in 1987. Once I had finalized my selection of primary sources, I conducted a comparative analysis of Lorca’s explicit references to white, particularly in his set descriptions, and its presence in the movie, being particularly attentive to how shifts in the characterization of the color also signified shifts in Bernarda’s surveillance.
In the process of adapting my piece to Tortoise, I have included additional context surrounding the play’s characters, as well as translations. I decided to select this particular excerpt precisely because of its capacity to display the shifts in Bernarda’s system of control, as well as the nuances that need to be taken into account when analyzing symbolic elements, as demonstrated by my comments on Maria Josefa and her white dress. The fragment also displays how aesthetic elements can reinforce the content of the discussed works. This is particularly important in the field of theatrical studies, as it functions as a reminder that elements of design can produce effects that can reinforce or subvert elements of a text.
One of the first steps in writing is identifying a clear motive. Louise’s piece offers a compelling example of how a seemingly small detail in a primary source can be meticulously picked apart to reveal its greater significance in the text—empirical motive. It follows that through this Louise quickly identified a scholarly motive, that the conversation had not previously considered the way color had been utilized in adaptations of the text. In particular, this excerpt focuses on the use of color—mostly white—as a narrative and thematic device, alongside showing how to comment on both stage and film adaptations of a text. The beginning of this excerpt demonstrates how Louise complicates white beyond a tempting binary interpretation of the color representing only surveillance, or black only protection from it. Louise analyzes a funeral scene and the visual appearance of the family grandmother, Maria Josefa, in order to show how the variation in the use of these colors reflects the complexity in the primary source’s themes.
This exploration continues through Louise’s attention to white’s intensity in luminosity, specifically when she pays attention to subtle shifts in description of the setting: from a “blanquíssima”/“very white” to “blanca”/white room. Once again, Louise goes further than discussing the recurrence of a symbol within the text, she closely reads to identify why these small choices are being made in primary source. By examining subtle shifts and variations, the writer uncovers complexity that might otherwise go unnoticed, like a detective piecing together clues. This careful, deliberate attention to detail exemplifies how strong analytical writing can emerge from engagement with even the smallest elements of a text.
One of the first steps in writing is identifying a clear motive. Louise’s piece offers a compelling example of how a seemingly small detail in a primary source can be meticulously picked apart to reveal its greater significance in the text—empirical motive. It follows that through this Louise quickly identified a scholarly motive, that the conversation had not previously considered the way color had been utilized in adaptations of the text. In particular, this excerpt focuses on the use of color—mostly white—as a narrative and thematic device, alongside showing how to comment on both stage and film adaptations of a text. The beginning of this excerpt demonstrates how Louise complicates white beyond a tempting binary interpretation of the color representing only surveillance, or black only protection from it. Louise analyzes a funeral scene and the visual appearance of the family grandmother, Maria Josefa, in order to show how the variation in the use of these colors reflects the complexity in the primary source’s themes.
This exploration continues through Louise’s attention to white’s intensity in luminosity, specifically when she pays attention to subtle shifts in description of the setting: from a “blanquíssima”/“very white” to “blanca”/white room. Once again, Louise goes further than discussing the recurrence of a symbol within the text, she closely reads to identify why these small choices are being made in primary source. By examining subtle shifts and variations, the writer uncovers complexity that might otherwise go unnoticed, like a detective piecing together clues. This careful, deliberate attention to detail exemplifies how strong analytical writing can emerge from engagement with even the smallest elements of a text.
Natalia Murillo ‘28 is a sophomore majoring in Sociology and minoring in Statistics and Machine Learning. On campus, she works as a Writing Center Fellow, is an undergraduate researcher at the Eviction Lab, and a member of Tigressions acapella.
Louise Sanches Barbosa ’27 is a third-year comparative literature student pursuing minors in theater and Spanish. She focuses on Brazilian and Hispanic literature, and her research interests include literary expressions within authoritarian regimes, historical memory, gender and sexuality in literature, and theater and performance as tools of political change. Louise’s work in theater primarily lies in writing, lighting design, and stage management. She also works as a student archivist at Special Collections and is an editor at the Nassau Weekly.
Using the health benefits of drinking Chinese tea as a case study, this paper explores how cultural tradition and modern science jointly shape what societies recognize as truth. A comparative analysis of Lu Yu’s The Classic of Tea and contemporary biochemical research shows that scientific findings often substantiate longstanding cultural observations rather than displace them. These texts are put in direct conversation with both Western and Eastern scholars, ultimately demonstrating that “truth” emerges through shifting knowledge conventions relevant to its cultural and historical context.
While historical tea literature associates tea with spirituality, modern scientific analysis reduces the healing effects of tea to its quantifiable levels of catechins and antioxidants. Spirituality-based tea literature and scientific analyses rely on different frameworks, even though they both conclude that tea contains health benefits, thus making it difficult to interpret them with a single lens. In recognizing this tension, it is essential to contrast the Western framework’s intuitive separation between scientific knowledge and cultural tradition with Eastern scholarly philosophical perspectives, which assumes seamless transition from lived experience and quantitative reasoning. Xinyan Jiang’s work “The Relationship Between Chinese Traditional Culture and Modern Science” offers insight that expands upon the patterns observed in historical Chinese tea literature. She directly challenges Daston and Galison’s Western assumption of inherent tension between tradition and scientific inquiry, arguing the fundamental unity between the observer and the observed: in this paper’s case study, the tea drinker’s cultural experience and the tea itself (Jiang 63).
This philosophical foundation notes that Chinese traditions typically employ “holistic thinking” that “emphasizes the unity of humanity and nature” (Jiang 65), which manifests in Lu Yu’s text through his metaphors linking tea to natural processes. In The Classic of Tea, Lu Yu presents tea as a restorative force tightly woven into the rhythms of human life and health. He writes that tea soothes “aching of the brain, smarting of the eyes, troubled in the four limbs or afflicted in the hundred joints” (Lu Yu 60), offering a catalog of bodily pains that tea can ease.
His language employs concrete, visceral descriptors: “aching,” “smarting,” “troubled,” “afflicted”, which emphasize direct, sensory experience rather than abstract theorization. The phrase “hundred joints” invokes totality through hyperbole, suggesting tea’s comprehensive healing power. When describing tea’s effects, he states it will “dispel an evening’s unproductive lassitude” (Lu Yu 115), where “dispel” suggests an almost magical banishing of fatigue, while “lassitude” elevates everyday tiredness to a condition deserving reverence and attention. This language establishes tea once again as not merely medicinal but spiritually transformative, capable of altering one’s state of being through sensory engagement.
Modern scientific research begins by explicitly acknowledging tea’s deep cultural lineage, calling upon Jiang’s point that truth is not a matter of falsehood, but rather, a difference in approach to knowledge (Jiang 70). A 2014 paper in the Journal of Traditional and Complementary Medicine opens its abstract by highlighting that “historical texts and legends have long associated tea with health benefits”, pointing to Lu Yu’s Cha Jing (Tea Bible) from the Tang Dynasty (Yang et al.). The paper also references the Xin Xiu Ben Cao of the Tang era, which describes tea as “bitter and sweet, slightly cold and with no toxicity,” able to “eliminate thirst, heat, and phlegm,” and the Ming Dynasty’s Ben Cao Gang Mu, which credits tea with strong anti-inflammatory properties (Yang et al.). By foregrounding both legend and classical medical literature, the scientific paper signals that its inquiry is not a rupture from cultural tradition but a continuation significant to the context of the society and time period in which the inquiry exists.
Yet today’s scientific experiments offer another layer of meaning to Lu Yu’s observations, connecting symbolic understanding to material processes. Revisiting Lu Yu’s healing properties, modern research provides a biochemical understanding of what the Chinese virtue of balance means at the molecular level. The research explains that white tea’s catechins and polyphenols act as “scavengers of reactive oxygen species,” help “prevent cellular damage,” and exert “anti-inflammatory, antimicrobial, and neuroprotective activities” (Yang et al.). Here, the language shifts markedly: terms like “modulate,” “interfere,” and “regulate” describe precise molecular interventions, while “scavengers” personifies chemical compounds as active agents maintaining bodily equilibrium. This scientific framing grounds the symbolic cultural meanings Lu Yu described, anchoring centuries-old conventions about tea’s healing effects within material reality.
While Western scholars like Kimmerer and Latour often frame the relationship between science and culture as fraught with tension, the case of Chinese tea shows an alternative: one where science and tradition work in complementary harmony. Science here does not challenge cultural knowledge; it extends it, providing new layers of meaning that support long-held conventions.
My analysis challenges Western frameworks – those of Daston and Galison, Latour, Martin, and Kimmerer, which assume an inherent tension between science and culture. Drawing on Xinyan Jiang’s insights and revisiting research papers which reference historical cultural texts to preface chemical analysis, the inclusion of Eastern perspectives embraces unity between empirical observation and cultural meaning. Ultimately, the simultaneous pursuit of poetry, spirit, science, and quantitative systems funnels into the desire for convention and collective truth. “Truth” becomes no longer a guarded entity, but a universal human desire to understand our relationship with the natural world and with each other. After all, “truth” is dictated only by what is seen, believed, and lived by.
Carpenter, Francis Ross, translator. The Classic of Tea. By Lu Yu, Weatherhill, 1974.
Daston, Lorraine, and Peter Galison. Objectivity. Zone Books, 2007.
Jiang, Xinyan. “The Relationship Between Chinese Traditional Culture and Modern Science.” Frontiers of Philosophy in China, vol. 8, no. 1, 2013, pp. 59–70.
Kimmerer, Robin Wall. Braiding Sweetgrass: Indigenous Wisdom, Scientific Knowledge and the Teachings of Plants. Milkweed Editions, 2013.
Latour, Bruno. We Have Never Been Modern. Harvard University Press, 1993.
Martin, Emily. The Woman in the Body: A Cultural Analysis of Reproduction. Beacon Press, 2001.
My writing process for this paper began with a much more straightforward academic research question. I aimed to examine the health benefits of drinking different Chinese teas, something I grew up consuming regularly. In my childhood, tea was often described as a drink that could cleanse the soul, heal the body, and improve blood circulation. My original research plan was to investigate these claims scientifically by examining modern research on antioxidants in different types of tea and correlating these findings with medical recommendations. I expected the paper to focus primarily on biochemical data and graphs showing the relationship between antioxidant content and health outcomes.
However, as I began researching tea more deeply, I encountered historical texts that shifted my curiosity. I discovered The Classic of Tea by Lu Yu, which was written in the eighth century Tang Dynasty, and is widely considered the first comprehensive book devoted entirely to tea. While the book presents itself as an authoritative guide on the “correct” way to produce, prepare, and drink tea, it concurrently contains no statistics, experiments, or numerical evidence. Instead, Lu Yu relies entirely on sensory experience and poetic description to establish tea’s value and healing properties. I was fascinated by the text’s authority seemingly derived from sole lived experience and cultural recognition rather than empirical measurement.
This realization led me to reconsider the central question of my research. Rather than asking whether tea is scientifically healthy, I began asking a broader question: what makes something “true”? I read works from many Western scholars who comment on the definitions of objectivity and perception such as Lorraine Daston, Peter Galison, and Bruno Latour. These scholars highlight how modern science strives for objectivity while simultaneously recognizing that knowledge is shaped by cultural context. I also noticed, however, that these scholars often frame science and cultural meaning as existing in tension with one another, always at an arm’s length away.
I then shifted to reading some Eastern scholars, who in contrast suggest a different relationship between tradition and scientific understanding. Rather than opposing each other, cultural knowledge and empirical investigation seemed to function as complementary ways of describing the same phenomena. This perspective was fascinating and blatantly clear when put in conversation with my case study of the health benefits in drinking Chinese tea, as both Lu Yu’s The Classic of Tea and modern research papers become equally “truthful”, just reflections of the knowledge conventions in their respective time periods and societies.
While, naturally, we may approach what we know to be untrue with suspicion, Alice nudges us toward the groundbreaking possibilities in approaching seemingly conflicting beliefs with cultural sensitivity. Through her exploration of the tension between Western and Eastern literature on tea, Alice supports that “Truth” is inextricable from the sociocultural paradigms that produce it. She engages the method of comparative analysis, first through orienting readers on the supposed tensions between the “objectivity” of Western literature and the spiritual, moral, and emotional essence of of Eastern literature on tea:
“While Western philosophy emphasizes the separation between observer and observed—laying groundwork for the “objectivity” that Daston and Galison problematize—Chinese philosophical traditions emphasize what Jiang calls “the unity of subject and object” (Jiang 63).”
Then, Alice challenges Western scholars’ understanding of science and culture as oppositional through highlighting Western science’s endorsement of Chinese traditional practices.
“…they begin by acknowledging cultural wisdom before elaborating on its material basis. The scientific language does not replace poetic metaphor; it provides a complementary vocabulary that enriches rather than dismisses traditional understanding.”
Through drawing consistencies between Western and Eastern literature, Alice disproves the notion that Eastern literature is “unscientific”; in doing so, she advocates for a positioning of Western scientific literature not as “superior nor ignorant of historical culture and belief.” While the beliefs posited by Western and Eastern scholars may appear in tension, Alice’s comparative analysis demonstrates how the same “truths” may be communicated differently through contrasting cultural frameworks. As Alice proves, “Truth” must be approached as deeply dynamic, indicative more of its cultural foundation than what is objectively true.
Alice Xu ’28 is an Electrical & Computer Engineering major, Technology & Society minor from Chinatown, New York City. Growing up between Chinese and Western cultural frameworks, she is interested in exploring how distinct traditions and disciplines intersect, such as in visual art and technology, fashion design and engineering, and science and culture.
Irene Kim ‘28 is a sophomore majoring in Sociology and minoring in Gender and Sexuality Studies, African American Studies, and Journalism. On campus, she is the founder and head of queer publication Passionfruit Magazine, a Mellon Mays Fellow, and a Writing Center Fellow.
This excerpt is from my final paper for HIS394: Thinking with Nature – Histories of Ecology & Environmentalism. The assignment asked students to explore a topic in environmental or ecological history over the twentieth-century. In my essay, I examine how predators have been represented in twentieth-century wildlife documentaries, tracing their evolution from feared killers to emotionally compelling keystone species. This shift reflects broader changes in environmental values, scientific understanding, and documentary storytelling techniques.
If Disney’s True-Life Adventures moralized predators as villains, victims, or noble heroes, ecological science ultimately rewrote their narrative role. Beginning in the 1970s, ecologists increasingly conceptualized predators as keystone species crucial to ecosystem stability,1 and filmmakers began adopting new cinematic technologies that enabled intimate, minimally intrusive observation.2 These developments were exemplified by David Attenborough’s BBC series Life on Earth (1979) and The Living Planet (1984), which presented predators not as spectacles, but as ecological participants embedded in ecological relationships.3
To understand this shift in representation, it is first necessary to consider the ecological concept of the apex predator. An apex predator occupies the top of a food chain and has no natural predators, yet its significance lies in its ecological influence. Apex predators regulate ecosystems through top-down control, shaping the abundance and behavior of other species.4 Robert Paine demonstrated this principle in his foundational studies of the ochre sea star (Pisaster ochraceus), whose predation on mussels maintained species diversity along the Pacific Northwest coast.5 Later research by James Estes and colleagues on sea otters in the Aleutian Islands revealed similar dynamics: when otter populations declined, sea urchins proliferated and devastated kelp forests.6 Such trophic cascades illustrate that predators function as keystone species, a term Paine coined to describe organisms whose ecological influence is disproportionately large relative to their numbers.7 In this view, predators are not defined primarily by violence but by the ecological equilibrium they sustain.
Attenborough’s documentaries drew directly on this ecological paradigm. Reflecting the systems-oriented perspective described by environmental historian Donald Worster, these films framed animals as interdependent components of dynamic ecosystems.8 In Life on Earth, predators are introduced less through mythic imagery than through morphology and evolutionary adaptation. Sharks, for example, are presented in terms of energy efficiency and sensory design. The hammerhead’s widely spaced eyes are explained as an evolutionary adaptation that improves prey detection,9 while the basking shark, drifting with its mouth open, exemplifies an energetically efficient feeding strategy.10 Narrative emphasis shifts from dramatic confrontation toward ecological explanation.
This scientific reframing was reinforced by a restrained aesthetic that contrasted with earlier wildlife films. Attenborough’s documentaries minimized dramatic musical scoring and moralizing narration, instead favoring ambient sound, extended takes, and subdued voiceover. As Ursula Heise argues, narrative restraint in environmental storytelling can disrupt the moral binaries that historically structured nature cinema.11 In The Living Planet, for instance, a lynx stalking prey in the northern forests is filmed in near silence, the camera following it without rapid editing.12 When the lynx drags a deer through the snow, the narration simply notes that the kill will sustain the entire lynx family.13 This stylistic restraint carries across species and habitats. Polar bears hunting seals are described in terms of thermodynamic and evolutionary adaptation rather than emotional drama.14 Even disturbing behaviors, such as adult bears killing cubs during periods of scarcity, are presented as ecological realities rather than moral transgressions. Attenborough frames animal behavior through a behaviorist lens shaped by environmental pressures rather than humanlike motivations.
The rise of this ecological style also reflected changes in the institutional landscape of wildlife filmmaking. As Gregg Mitman observes in Reel Nature, Life on Earth appeared at a moment when American wildlife television was undergoing a crisis of identity.15 Earlier programs, such as Wild Kingdom, relied heavily on spectacle and confrontation between humans and animals. By the late 1970s, however, educators and broadcasters increasingly criticized these formats for prioritizing excitement over scientific understanding. There was concern that the slower pacing of British natural history documentaries would fail to capture American audiences accustomed to spectacle-driven programming.16 Yet when PBS broadcast Life on Earth in 1982, the series proved both popular and influential. Because PBS operated under a public service mandate rather than commercial profit pressures, it could support long-form natural history storytelling oriented towards education.17 In this context, wildlife documentaries evolved into “blue chip” productions: visually sophisticated films designed to appeal to mass audiences and educational institutions.
Technological innovation also played a crucial role in enabling this transformation. Earlier wildlife filmmakers often relied on staged scenes, captive animals, or intrusive chase techniques to capture predation on film.18 By the 1980s, however, advances such as telephoto lenses, stabilized aerial platforms, and remote camera traps allowed crews to observe animals at greater distances and over longer periods without disrupting their behavior.19 These tools made it possible to document elusive predators in remote environments, from snow leopards in Himalayan cliffs20 to nocturnal desert hunters.21 Film scholar Derek Bousé describes this development as the emergence of “visual ecology,” a cinematic approach that situates animal behavior within environmental systems rather than isolating dramatic moments.22 The pacing of these documentaries, marked by long shots and minimal editing, mirrored the ecological principles they depicted: respect for environmental context and the complexity of life in the wild.
Bousé, Derek. Wildlife films. Philadelphia, Pennsylvania: University of Pennsylvania Press, 2000.
Encyclopædia Britannica. Apex Predator. Last modified February 20, 2024. https://www.britannica.com/science/apex-predator.
Estes, James A., and John F. Palmisano. “Sea Otters: Their Role in Structuring Nearshore Communities.” Science 185, no. 4156 (September 20, 1974): 1058–60. https://doi.org/10.1126/science.185.4156.1058.
Heise, Ursula K. Imagining Extinction: The Cultural Meanings of Endangered Species. Chicago, Illinois: The University of Chicago Press, 2016.
Life on Earth. Directed by David Attenborough. BBC, 1979. Internet Archive. https://archive.org/details/life-on-earth-1979.
Mitman, Gregg. Reel Nature: America’s Romance with Wildlife on Film. Vancouver: University of Washington Press, 2014.
Paine, Robert T. “A Note on Trophic Complexity and Community Stability.” The American Naturalist 103, no. 929 (January 1969): 91–93. https://doi.org/10.1086/282586.
The Living Planet. Directed by David Attenborough. BBC, 1984. Internet Archive. https://archive.org/details/bbc-the-living-planet.
Worster, Donald. Nature’s Economy: A History of Ecological Ideas. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1994.
When I began planning this essay, I struggled to settle on a topic because the prompt was very open-ended. I knew I wanted to write about animals in visual media, but I was unsure how to shape that interest into a focused analytical argument. At first, I considered examining how animals were portrayed to children, yet I found that direction less compelling because it did not allow me to engage with the scientific and historical dimensions of environmental storytelling that interested me most. Since I have always enjoyed watching wildlife documentaries, I began to wonder how those films have changed over time, particularly in their portrayal of predators. As I started researching and encountering both film scholarship and ecological ideas, this curiosity developed into a clearer focus on the historical evolution of predator representation in twentieth-century wildlife documentaries.
One challenge I faced during the writing process was balancing cultural analysis with scientific explanation. Because my topic sits at the intersection of media history and ecological thought, I often found it challenging to determine how much background information was necessary in each section. In earlier drafts, some passages became overly descriptive of specific film scenes, while others leaned too heavily on technical ecological concepts. Revising the essay required me to think more carefully about structure and progression. I ultimately organized the paper chronologically so that readers could follow how documentary styles, scientific understandings, and cultural values shifted over time. This structure also helped me to clarify my own argument, especially as I worked to connect individual film examples to broader intellectual developments.
The excerpt I selected represents a turning point in both the essay and my writing process. In this section, I move from discussing symbolic and dramatized portrayals of predators to explaining how ecological science reshaped their narrative role. Writing this passage pushed me to synthesize multiple strands of research and to position my interpretation in relation to existing scholarship. Rather than simply describing documentary techniques or historical context, I begin to explain why these representational changes mattered for how audiences understood predators and their ecological significance.
Overall, this excerpt captures what I found most meaningful about writing the paper: recognizing how media representations are shaped by evolving scientific knowledge and cultural perspectives. It marks the point where my initial curiosity about wildlife documentaries developed into a clearer analytical framework. Throughout this process, I gained a stronger understanding not only of my topic but also of how sustained engagement with a multitude of sources can help refine and strengthen an academic argument.
Reading Maya’s excerpt, I was struck by how she uses framing to shift the way we understand predators. Rather than portraying them as villains or heroes, Maya shows how ecological science and documentary filmmaking work together to present predators as keystone species essential to ecosystem balance. She consistently connects scientific studies to Attenborough’s documentaries, guiding readers to see animals in terms of ecological function rather than drama or morality. For instance, when Maya writes that “predators are introduced less through mythic imagery than through morphology and evolutionary adaptation,” it highlighted for me how perspective can shape understanding.
The examples she chooses make this framing clear. The explanation of the hammerhead shark’s widely spaced eyes as an adaptation for prey detection stood out—it’s a small detail, but it demonstrates Maya’s point that Attenborough emphasizes ecological reality over spectacle. Similarly, the line “Attenborough frames animal behavior through a behaviorist lens shaped by environmental pressures rather than humanlike motivations” helped me see how framing guides interpretation, even for behaviors that might seem harsh or shocking. By including sea stars, sea otters, and polar bears, Maya shows that this perspective applies across ecosystems and species.
Maya also highlights how style reinforces framing. She notes the use of long shots, minimal editing, and subdued narration, which mirrors the ecological principles being described. The connection she draws between technological advances, like remote cameras and telephoto lenses, and the ability to film animals without disrupting them made me appreciate how framing can be both conceptual and practical.
Overall, Maya’s excerpt shows how framing shapes meaning through evidence, style, and structure. Her careful choices invite readers to reconsider predators, focusing on ecological significance rather than spectacle. This analysis helped me see the essay as more than a summary of science or film. It is a deliberate argument, making it a strong example of Lexicon close reading.
Maya Cabrera ‘27 is a junior from San Antonio, Texas, majoring in Ecology and Evolutionary Biology with a minor in Visual Arts. Her research interests include host-parasite dynamics, ecoimmunology, and behavioral ecology. She serves as co-president of the Princeton Beekeeping Team, is a Science Outreach fellow, and participates in the Princeton Conservation Society. In her free time, she enjoys exploring the outdoors, reading, creating ceramic sculptures, and observing animals.
Aanya Kasera ‘28 is a sophomore at Princeton majoring in Molecular Biology with minors in Neuroscience and Global Health & Health Policy. She is active in the Writing Center Program, conducts research in the Wang Lab at the Princeton Neuroscience Institute, and serves as a Peer Health Adviser. In her free time, she enjoys reading, baking, creative writing, playing the piano, and listening to Enhypen.
The following excerpt is from my semester-long research paper for ART329: Architecture of Confinement, from the Hospice to the Era of Mass Incarceration. The prompt was to produce a historical research paper on imprisonment grounded in architecture and based on a thematic area. I chose the thematic area “art” and explored set design architecture within Beethoven’s sole opera, Fidelio, a prime example of the ‘prison opera’ subgenre. To track the set’s architectural evolution, I examine three productions of Fidelio from 1870, 1989, and 2020. In this excerpt, I highlight my analysis of the 1989 and 2020 productions and include a portion of an interview I conducted with NY-based teacher and playwright, Aaron Landsman, whom I spoke with to better understand how art could be used as a social/political tool. Fidelio’s plot highlights the cruelty and corruption within prisons, and therefore the set design in Fidelio depicts how prison architecture is used ‘immorally’ or against its most ideal purpose. In essence, Fidelio’s set provides a clue into how the anti-prison would be designed. By analyzing various set designs throughout the centuries of Fidelio’s performances, it’s possible to see what aspects of prisons were condemned in that particular historical moment. I therefore argue that Fidelio’s set designs across these three periods exemplify the influence and evolution of the prison reform movement on the societal usage of prisons.
And the prisoners sang, “Oh, freedom, freedom! Heavenly powers! Oh freedom! Will it yet be ours?”1 Nearing the close of Act I of Beethoven’s only opera, Fidelio, set entirely within a prison, inmates are released from their cells into the prison yard, experiencing air, light, life, and wondering if this is the moment they will finally be free. It is not yet to be, and the once hopeful prisoner’s chorus is shunted back into the prison, which they call their grave.2 This heartbreaking moment of confinement forces the audience to reckon with the physical and psychological horrors of incarceration. The stage transforms into a prison. The prison, whose architectural plans, practices, and dealings are so often hidden from public view, now becomes the primary object of scrutiny. Historically, opera’s combination of visual and musical elements has allowed viewers and performers to delve deeply into the human condition, addressing a wide range of subjects, from the serious to the satirical. The operatic prison scene, rife with drama and internal, psychological turbulence, is one of the most poignant ways to explore the human condition through music.
The theme of confinement and the display of prison scenes in opera became especially pervasive in the 1700s. Arguably, confinement has existed in opera since the genre’s inception, as the first opera with surviving music was Jacopo Peri’s Euridice (1597), followed by what considered the first operatic masterpiece, Monteverdi’s L’Orfeo (1607). Both works are based on the Greek myth of Orpheus, who must rescue his love Eurydice from hell, a realm she cannot escape, which is often alluded to in depictions of confinement.
Given the storied history of confinement in opera, its onstage presentation has undergone many shifts. This paper will examine the architectural evolution of confinement in operatic set design, with a focus on social and political movements that influenced public perceptions of incarceration. Centering on Beethoven’s Fidelio, this paper will investigate the trajectory of its set through the 19th, 20th, and 21st centuries based on set designs from three productions (1870, 1989, and 2020. It then considers the implicit arguments of the opera’s set design architecture. I argue that designs of Fidelio’s set across these three periods exemplify the influence and evolution of the prison reform movement on prisons’ shifting societal usage. Regardless of the time period Fidelio is set in, the opera maintains a steady criticism of imprisonment for imprisonment’s sake, suggesting that incarceration must instead prioritize reform.
From the Dungeon’s Hidden Depths to a Culture of Surveillance
The prison reform movement began around 1750, arising from the heavy criticism of well-known prisons such as Newgate for being sites of moral vice. There was a growing fear of lower-level prisoners intermingling with higher-level criminals and becoming morally worse for it.3 As a response to these conditions, the penal reforms of the late 18th and early 19th centuries both regulated imprisonment and gave it a moral purpose rather than a solely punitive one.4 The primary goal of prisons shifted from security to reform and societal reentry. One important authority during this period was The Society for the Improvement of Prison Discipline (SIPD), which argued that prisons must ideologically account for:
SIPD’s third element of reformed prisons, “Systematic supervision of both guards and prisoners,” originally served as a way of implementing a ‘moral science.’ In theory, surveillance of prisoners would enforce a behavioral code, ‘being at the conquest of human nature.’6 For example, Pentonville, a British carceral facility built in the 1850s, utilized a new architectural plan: the radial plan. This design allowed guards to efficiently assess the state of order within the prison by surveying the space between inmates and cells. As technology evolved, surveillance only became more acute. This was a crucial shift away from the dungeon – the original setting of Fidelio, which structurally represented pre-reform imprisonment. As Foucault argues in Discipline and Punish, the three functions of the dungeon were to 1) enclose, 2) deprive of light, and 3) to hide.7 Now, enhanced surveillance led to a shift in the opposite direction: towards near-constant visibility.
The Panopticon and Societal Surveillance
The pinnacle of surveillance within prison architecture was Jeremy Bentham’s panopticon, designed with a central watchtower from which guards could monitor every cell while prisoners never knew when they were being watched. Although the panopticon itself was not immediately constructed, various authoritarian regimes (ex., Nazi Germany, Soviet-controlled East Germany, etc.) implemented the idea of watching prisoners (and/or citizens) in the following periods. This provides important context when analyzing a staging in the late 20th century: the powerful 1989 production of Fidelio at the Dresden Semperoper.
On October 7th and 8th, Christine Mielitz’s production of Fidelio coincided with the Socialist Unity Party of Germany’s (SED) heavy surveillance over East Germany. Tensions were rising in the days leading up to October 9, 1989, the state’s 40th birthday.8In the opera’s libretto, the stage direction “Volk eilt herzu,” or “the people rush in,” cues the grand finale, representing the literal and symbolic arrival of the masses. Moray McGowan, a scholar in contemporary German social history, explored the significance of “Volk eilt herzu” in the 1989 Fidelio production by comparing it to how the word “Volk” was used by the SED in their crackdown efforts in policing the state.9 As SED leaders braced for protest in the lead-up to the state’s 40th anniversary, they readied the “Volkspolizei” (people’s police) and the “Volksarmee” (people’s army), two parties meant to represent the “Volk” who, in actuality, arrested civilians en masse. Between October 3 and 9, there were 1,303 arrests, completely overwhelming the capabilities of the Volkspolizei and leading to overcrowding, abuse, and increased lack of sanitation in holding facilities.10 These conditions were quite reminiscent of pre-reform jails, pointing to an interesting juxtaposition. While certain Stasi prisons used surveillance methods derived from the reform movement, the question of whether they were truly enacting a “moral science” was questionable, as many issues within Stasi prisons were considered pre-reform concerns. The SED’s totalitarian regime, exemplifying panopticism (a reform-era concept), was inadvertently reverting to pre-reform practices. Even if the architecture of Stasi prisons stemmed from reform movement principles, there seemed to be a tipping point where the new “moral science” of reform became a cover for control.

Mielitz’s 1989 production of Fidelio purposefully alluded to two famous Stasi prisons: the Bautzen I and II. Surveillance was essential in both prisons. In the 1989 production, a guard tower looms in the background, casting unceasing beams of light upon the prisoners and high walls topped with wire.11 Associating the reform-era architecture of surveillance with the ‘anti-prison’ inherent in Fidelio displays a perversion of reform ideals.
Fidelio in the Abstract
While the prison landscape of the Dresden Semperoper production reflected the tensions directly outside the opera house, the 2020 production of Fidelio at the Theater an der Wien (designed by architects at Barkow Leibinger, an architecture firm based in Berlin) attempted to avoid associations with specific prisons to instead emphasize the music and action. The set is a double-helix, spiralling vertically to the full height and depth of the backstage, described by the firm as a “kind of modern Piranesian vertical labyrinth.”12


The set takes up the entire stage and threatens to spill over into the audience, standing in stark contrast to the more traditional, enclosed architecture of the Theater an der Wien. The stairs appear mountainous, defying logic as they fold upside down, leading nowhere. Where stairs were previously used to delineate upper and lower levels, their lack of a destination illustrates the endless, circuitous nature of incarceration. There is no up or down, escape becomes futile, and imprisonment lasts beyond the structure itself.
In her book Marking Time: Art in the Age of Mass Incarceration, Nicole Fleetwood, an academic, prison abolitionist, and curator, deconstructs spaces of solitary confinement. She addresses Giorgio Agamben’s theory of “bare life,” where prisoners in isolated spaces yell at each other through walls to navigate exclusion from human interaction. The set’s simplicity and the endless white of the space are reminiscent of the sensory deprivation in solitary confinement and prisons generally. Perhaps this set is a physical depiction of confinement extending beyond corporeal constructs. The repercussions of extreme isolation (unnatural and jarring to humans who require socialization) extend for years following imprisonment. Some prisoners must relearn how to walk, following long-term, unnatural enclosure in tight spaces.13 Fleetwood also discusses how they experience “dead time,” struggling to keep track of days of the week and hours of the day.14 In the space of the double helix, a representation of infinity or endless time, there is no way to mark the passing of the days. Any light coming in is artificial, and without windows, the structure creates a space entirely separated from the outside world. Within this paradigm, the prospect of reentry grows dim, and imprisonment centers on punishment rather than reform.
Imagining a Post-Prison World
Today, there is another philosophical offshoot of the prison reform movement: the prison abolition movement. A key originator of the movement, Angela Davis (American Marxist and political activist), explains in her book, Are Prisons Obsolete?, that while the prison system is generally seen as an “unconditional standard,” an abolitionist approach calls for rethinking the carceral system and replacing it both physically and ideologically with alternative strategies and institutions.15 Within the context of this new philosophy, perhaps there is yet another way to examine the lack of a prison within Theater an der Wien’s 2020 Fidelio production. Rather than the extensive white space and double helix design representing the barrenness and endless nature of modern prison facilities, it may instead portray undefined abolitionist alternatives.
To understand art’s role in exploring issues of confinement, I spoke with New York-based playwright, performer, and teacher Aaron Landsman, who is interested in how power dynamics and institutional systems impact human behavior. In response to my question on the process of theatermaking for social impact, Landsman discussed a practice he’s been approached with by other artists: seventh-generation stewardship.16 Originally derived from The Great Law of Haudenosaunee Confederacy (the framework for the political, cultural, and spiritual union of the tribes within the Iroqois Nation), seventh-generation stewardship calls people to consider the impacts of their actions seven generations in advance.17 Reconsidering the 2020 Fidelio production in tandem with ideas of prison abolition and seventh-generation stewardship as a guide to art-making, another interpretation of this staging actually points to the idealization of a world without prisons.
Interpreting the 2020 production as a prison-abolition-alluding work allows the audience to imagine a post-prison future. By taking an opera inherently about prison and removing the prison, the production questions whether prisons are truly essential, an increasingly topical issue within the modern movement. The prison reform movement instigated countless shifts in architecture, many in alignment with new prison-governing principles. The acceptance and prevalence of emerging architectural prison plans were aided by forms of visual media, such as set design, that either supported or protested those design choices. In the midst of an ongoing reform movement, art today can envision the potential future of prisons. As Fidelio maintains its criticism of imprisonment for imprisonment’s sake and necessitates reform within prison, perhaps it can extend to a new vision of reform that extends beyond prison walls, eventually turning them to dust.
Barkow Leibinger. “Fidelio.” Accessed November 7, 2025, https://barkowleibinger.com/en/projects/fidelio.
Davis, Angela. “Abolitionist Alternatives.” In Are Prisons Obsolete? Seven Stories Press, 2003.
Evans, Robin. “Introduction.” In The Fabrication of Virtue: English Prison Architecture, 1750-1840, Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, 1982. Journal of Social Policy.
Fleetwood, Nicole. “Resisting Isolation: Art in Solitary Confinement.” In Marking Time: Art in the Age of Mass Incarceration. Harvard University Press, 2020. https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctv11vcfjs.
Foucault, Michel. “Panopticism.” In Discipline and Punish: The Birth of Prison. Translated by Alan Sheridan. Vintage Books, 1995.
Johnston, Norman. Forms of Constraint: A History of Prison Architecture. University of Illinois Press 2000.
Law, K. F., Syropoulos, S., Young, L., & Bo, B. (2025). Mapping prescriptive beliefs on seventh-generation stewardship and increasing the temporal scope of intergenerational concern. Scientific Reports, 15(1), 37618. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-025-21466-9
McGowan, Moray. “‘Volk Eilt Herzu’: Beethoven’s Opera Fidelio in Dresden on October 7 and 8, 1989, and Its Ambivalent Afterlife.” In Edinburgh German Yearbook 13: Music in German Politics / Politics in German Music, edited by Siobhán Donovan and Maria Euchner, 115–32. Boydell & Brewer, 2022. https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctv134vk5c.10.
Sonnleithner, Joseph and Treitschke, Georg Friedrich. Fidelio: An Opera in Two Acts, composed by Ludwig van Beethoven, Belwin Mills Publishing Corp., New York, 197-?. Libretto from the French of Jean-Nicolas Bouilly. English translation by Edward J. Dent. Reprinted by permission of Oxford University Press.
Wilson, Jacqueline Z. and Ian Boyle. “Representing Political Oppression: The Stasi Prison as an Edifice of Cultural Memory in Modern Berlin.” In The Palgrave Handbook of Prison Tourism. Palgrave Macmillan UK, 2017.
This was my first semester-long research project, and it pushed me as a writer and scholar in ways I didn’t even know of. Having the privilege of taking on a paper like this as early as my Fall semester of sophomore year has given me an incredible sense of self-assurance and excitement for research to come. The topic of this paper had been circulating in my head for at least a year or two preceding this project, since I fell in love with opera at 10 years old and discovered a passion for prison reform my freshman year of high school.
The structure of writing this paper was unique. Before searching for arguments, we submitted a purely historical version without any inherent thesis. This allowed me to dive deeply into the context surrounding Fidelio and prison architecture, but it also sometimes caused uncertainty regarding the amount of context the reader needed. This was a focus of my revision process, and I hoped to clearly center not just the new thesis I was writing, but the motive – why this topic mattered. I knew many readers might not come into this paper with a background in opera or see the connection between Fidelio and its political implications offstage, so I hoped to first ground my audience in the rich history of opera and the prison opera subgenre.
The interdisciplinary nature of the paper was both a challenge and an opportunity. I wanted to thread in architectural drawings of prisons, set diagrams, the opera’s libretto, and other materials that merged the world of incarceration with opera. The multimedia elements of this paper made research challenging as I scoured databases for the ideal images, but this work was necessary, given that architecture is a primarily visual medium. The time I took to select the images also led to my favorite analytical chunks of the essay, where I pried into minute details as our professor, Dr. Baudez, taught us to do. We spent a lot of time in class discussing the form and function of prisons. Often, details such as the width of stairs, distribution of windows, or size of dormitories provided vital clues into the architect’s/institution’s intentions. When evaluating spaces of confinement, every element provides hints to whether/how imprisonment serves to punish or reform.
It is no easy task to marry incisive close-reading and sweeping socio-political evaluation in one paper, but Gabrielle manages to do just that. The relationship between aesthetics and politics, visual representation and social critique, is perceptively sketched out in Gabrielle’s essay. “God! What Darkness Here: Prison Architecture in Beethoven’s Fidelio” epitomizes the effective writing that takes place when a writer’s “deep dive” spans numerous oceans.
The historical stakes of the different productions of Beethoven’s Fidelio are effectively delineated by Gabrielle’s orienting. She situates the reader within the reformist ambitions of the 18th-century Society for the Improvement of Prison Discipline (SIPD), while simultaneously placing these ideals in tension with the emergence of new carceral technologies across the 18th and 19th centuries. It is equally impressive how Gabrielle weaves in theoretical texts alongside this orienting. Pivoting from the Pentonville facility to French theorist Michel Foucault’s concept of the “panopticon” in Discipline and Punish, and then moving directly into Christine Mielitz’s production shows an important lesson: deeply engaging with—but never over-relying on—lens texts. Including canonical theorists like Foucault and modern critics like Nicole Fleetwood, she adds depth to the argumentation while never fully obscuring her own writer’s voice.
Her close readings are especially compelling in this regard. Gabrielle resists the temptation to treat visual documentation as merely illustrative; she approaches them as generative sites of discovery and meaning. Whether she is unpacking the guard tower in Mielitz’s 1989 production or tracing the logic of the double-helix set in the 2020 staging that “illustrates the endless, circuitous nature of incarceration,” her attention to form becomes a way of thinking through ideology. These moments construct bridges between the micro and the macro, the tangible and the abstract, where each detail actively speaks to her larger argument about control, surveillance, and the evolving logic of incarceration.
Perhaps most importantly, this essay presents a strong case for motive and thesis. Gabrielle does not simply present a claim about the evolution of prison architecture; she orients the reader toward why this question matters in the first place. The essay’s motive emerges through her sustained effort to connect operatic staging to broader socio-political structures that extend far beyond the stage. In this sense, her thesis, that “regardless of the time period Fidelio is set in, the opera maintains a steady criticism of imprisonment for imprisonment’s sake, suggesting that incarceration must instead prioritize reform,” functions more as a throughline, pressure-tested across historical contexts.
Moving fluidly across multiple disciplinary frameworks without fragmenting her argument, Gabrielle traverses history, architectural analysis, performance studies, and critical theory while remaining grounded in each analytical turn. This is the essay’s central strength: a sustained commitment to connecting close reading with broader socio-political stakes, allowing each lens to sharpen rather than diffuse her argument.
Gabrielle Liberman ‘28 is a sophomore from Summit, New Jersey. She is thrilled to soon declare as a History major! At Princeton, Gabrielle is President of the Princeton Opera Company, a member of the Glee Club, sings in the Princeton Tigerlilies, and enjoys attending guest speaker lectures, reading historical fiction, and proudly representing her residential college, Forbes. She loves nothing more than spending time with her parents and friends.
Nikki Han ’28 is an English major from Sydney, Australia. On campus, she is a Writing Center Fellow, the head Features editor for The Daily Princetonian, and a poetry editor for Moon Press. She enjoys wandering around art galleries, watching films in movie theaters, and collecting miscellaneous items for her scrapbook.
Wendy Wang ’28 is a Comparative Literature major from Shenzhen, China. On campus, she is a Writing Center Fellow, a Peer Health Advisor, and the Community Engagement Chair and a barista at Coffee Club. She enjoys city-biking, dark roast coffee, and films where not much happens.
It can feel daunting to create complex, original analysis. Even if a writer has an exciting question and a confident understanding of the elements of a successful piece of academic writing (already no easy task!), crafting the substance of the paper often still feels like exploring an unknown and foreboding terrain. In research, though, it’s often the case that the closer you look, the more you’ll see, as these excerpts demonstrate. Eitan Gelb’s deep engagement with Jewish scholar Maimonides’s framing of polygyny reveals implications for the interaction of culture and law in the context of Jewish tradition. Meanwhile, Louise Sanches Barbosa decrypts the color white’s shades of meaning (pun intended!) in Federico García Lorca’s play The House of Bernarda Alba, showing how this close reading complements the play’s textual narrative and visual staging.
— Jordan Fraser Angel ’27
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